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The Hollowed Flame: When justice is relative

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A dragon is threatening the city. The knight, on his way to stop him, will find out that maybe the truth has not been told...

The Hollowed Flame: When justice is relative

The knight rode in silence beneath ashen skies, entering a wasteland where even the wind held its breath. The air was dry and tasted of dust; each exhale seemed to rasp from the throat of the land itself. Charcoal husks of trees lined the road like mourners, their barren branches clawing at an empty heaven. No birdsong or cricket’s chirr could be heard, only the crunch of the knight’s boots when he dismounted and the faint jingle of tack as he led his horse onward. In that oppressive quiet, an unspoken sorrow hung in the atmosphere. It felt as though the very world was offering up a silent plea for deliverance, a muted cry that sank into the knight’s bones and urged him forward.

He passed the crumbling remnants of a village long fallen to ruin. Lean-to shacks and stone cottages stood abandoned, doors left ajar and windows vacant of light. Inside one hut, a wooden bowl lay overturned on the floor, its contents long decayed to dust. In another, a chair was toppled beside cold ash where a hearth had gone lifeless. He moved carefully through each lonely space, bearing witness to the traces of life that once were: a scrap of cloth snagged on a splintered door, a child’s doll carved from willow wood left lying in the dirt. Every detail spoke of abrupt departure or desperate flight. The knight knelt by a dry fountain in the village square, its basin cracked and empty, and touched the powdery residue at its bottom. Once, water might have flowed here to slake the thirst of humble folk; now nothing remained but stone and hunger. He bowed his head, fingers clenching around a handful of parched earth, and he understood. Whatever scourge had swept through this place had left not flame-charred ruin, but a barren silence. There were no bodies to bury or wounded to console, only absence. That void was itself the message. In the heavy hush, the knight could almost hear the ghostly echo of prayers unanswered. It was this very quiet that screamed out to him, urging him to do what others could not or would not. In the stillness, he made a vow to whatever spirits listened that the people who had lived here would not remain forsaken.

With renewed purpose, the knight pressed on toward the dark shape looming on the horizon. Far beyond the village, a jagged silhouette of a castle crown broke the monotony of the flat, grey distance. The structure stood upon a rise of black rock, its broken towers piercing the sky like the ribs of a long-dead beast. Though distant, it called to him with an almost palpable pull. He readied his horse and continued the journey, each step weighted by the evidence of the land’s despair. Behind him, the ghost-village receded into the dust, but its silent plea travelled with him as a whisper at his back.

The road deteriorated into a rough trail as the knight ascended into the highlands. Here the terrain grew wild and stony, twisted into shapes of agony by ancient convulsions of the earth. Massive boulders flanked the path like silent sentinels. Some bore deep gouges and scorch marks; whether by time or by claws and fire, it was impossible to tell. The knight’s mount snorted uneasily at the scent in the air, a faint trace of sulfur and something like dried blood. When the trail narrowed between sheer cliffs, he left the horse at the base of the pass, knowing the final approach must be made on foot. He gave the weary animal a gentle pat on its flank; the creature’s ribs showed from scarcity of graze, and it lowered its head gratefully when the knight removed its bridle and let it loose to seek what little grass it could find. Alone now, the knight began to climb.

Rubble and loose stones skittered away under his armored boots as he picked his way upward. The sun offered little warmth, a pale disc behind gauzy clouds, yet sweat beaded on his brow from exertion. Each breath drawn in was thin and acrid, tinged with the decay of long-spent fires. He paused at a bend where the path clung to the mountainside and surveyed the valley below. The world behind him was colorless and still, a patchwork of grey rock and faded scrub. Nothing stirred. Not a bird, not a distant herd, life itself seemed to have fled or fallen dormant. He realized with a chill that even the insects had abandoned these heights. All that accompanied him was the ceaseless gnawing of hunger in his belly and the dryness in his throat. He could not remember the last time he had taken water; his waterskin had emptied far too quickly, as if the very air drank its contents. Thirst latticed his tongue and hunger clawed at his gut, yet he forced himself onward. Each labored step was an act of resolve, a prayer of movement answering the voiceless call that had drawn him this far.

As daylight waned, the knight reached a steep staircase carved into the mountainside, half collapsed from neglect. The stone steps were cracked and dusted in loose gravel, winding up to a narrow ledge above. With careful, deliberate steps he ascended, mindful of the sheer drop at his side. At the top, a plateau unfurled, scattered with the weathered statues of grotesque gargoyles that once guarded the approach to the fortress. Many lay toppled and shattered, their features eroded to indistinct lumps by years of wind. He passed them quietly, his hand resting on the hilt of his sword, and continued along the final stretch of rocky road.

At last the ruined castle stood before him. Twilight gathered in its hollow windows and between its crumbling crenellations. The outer gate had long since fallen off its hinges; one great door lay split on the ground, consumed by moss and rust. The other hung crookedly, like the jaw of a corpse frozen in an eternal, silent wail. Vines, brown and lifeless, clung to the stone walls in skeletal filigrees. The knight stepped through the gatehouse, over a threshold of shattered oak planks and bent iron bands, entering the castle’s outer courtyard. Beneath his feet, the ground felt unnatural, soil turned to powder, strewn with pebbles and shards of tile from the rooftops. He advanced slowly, every sense alert. The silence here was different from that of the village or the mountainside; it was dense and potent, an almost physical weight pressing in on him. It was the silence of a tomb that had never been sealed properly, threatening to exhale its secrets at any moment.

Moonlight, thin and weak, filtered through tattered clouds as night settled. In that dim glow, the knight surveyed the courtyard. The walls cast long shadows that pooled in the corners where his gaze could not reach. An old well stood off-center, its stone lip cracked. He peered inside but saw no glimmer of water, just a dry, yawning mouth descending into darkness. Crossing the yard, he noted the remnants of what might have been stables or a smithy, now collapsed into heaps of timber and stone. A rusted helm lay in the dirt, half buried; when he nudged it with his boot, a brittle scorpion scuttled out and vanished into a crevice. The knight’s grip tightened on his sword. Everything around him spoke of abandonment and decline, yet he felt an undercurrent of presence, as if he were being watched by unseen eyes in the holes of the ruin. He had the uncanny sensation that the castle itself was aware of him, that each step he took was anticipated by something deep within its bowels.

Ahead, the great keep loomed, its broad doors shut but not immune to time’s decay. One door was ajar, a gap wide enough to admit a single person. The knight approached, heart thudding a measured cadence in his chest. Upon the door’s surface, a faded emblem was carved, a rampant dragon intertwined with a flame, nearly worn smooth by age. He pushed gently and the heavy door yielded with a long, mournful creak, the sound echoing down the throat of darkness beyond. For a moment he stood at the threshold, steadying his breath, aware that beyond that portal lay the heart of whatever darkness had overtaken this land. Gathering his courage, he stepped inside.

The darkness within was thick, but not complete. Gaps in the masonry and a partially collapsed roof allowed thin shafts of moonlight to penetrate, falling in pale beams across the hall. The knight waited, letting his eyes adjust. The scene gradually emerged from the shadows: a grand entry hall strewn with debris, shattered furniture, and the remnants of banners that once hung proudly from the rafters. Now those banners were reduced to fraying threads that stirred faintly in the draft that whispered through the breach in the ceiling. Each footfall the knight made stirred fine motes of dust that swirled like phantom apparitions in the silvery light. The air was stale and carried a faint charred scent, intermingled with something sweetly rotten. It was the odor of long-dead things left to desiccate undisturbed.

Step by step, he advanced through the hall, past toppled columns and heaps of plaster fallen from the ceiling. His sword remained drawn, the blade reflecting glints of moonlight. He noticed on the floor a scattering of coins, blackened and dull. A few steps further, the hilt of a sword jutted from beneath a fallen beam. He heaved the beam aside with a grunt, revealing beneath it a human form flattened and broken. The corpse was nothing more than a leathery husk in rusted mail, its flesh shrunken tight over bones. There were no obvious wounds from blade or flame. The sight gave the knight pause. He had seen death in many forms on battlefields and in monster-haunted wilds, but this was different. It was as if life had simply been siphoned away, leaving an empty vessel of skin and bone. A sense of foreboding tugged at him as he realized this man, perhaps a soldier or adventurer, had not died peacefully. He stepped back, suddenly aware that the first dried corpse was not the only one.

As he moved deeper into the castle’s inner chambers, more remains came into view. In a side corridor, two figures lay slumped against the wall, their faces shrunken into skull-like visages, fingers curled into claws on the stone floor. Further in, at the threshold of what seemed to be the great hall of the keep, a cluster of bodies in rotted leather armor encircled a large wooden chest, as if they had quarreled to their last breath over whatever treasure it held. None bore any sign of blood or burning; their skin was gray and withered, eyes sunken in hollow sockets that stared at nothing. The knight’s stomach tightened. He felt not fear so much as sorrow and grim resolve, whatever had done this was more terrible than a simple predator. This was cruelty of a different sort, an agonizing death by thirst or by some unnatural leeching of the spirit.

At last he passed under a grand archway into the castle’s treasure hall. Here the collapsed ceiling opened the chamber to the night sky, and moonlight cascaded down in a broad, pale beam. All around, piled against the walls and strewn across the floor, were treasures enough to ransom kingdoms: coins spilling from split chests, gilded goblets and platters, jewels glinting like sullen eyes in the dark. Yet the grandeur of the hoard was tarnished by the presence of death. More corpses were scattered among the riches, some clutching bags of gold, others sprawled over jewel-encrusted armor as if they had fallen while in the act of plundering. The treasure hall, which should have sparkled with life under the moon’s glow, instead resembled an open crypt, a grotesque tableau of greed and demise.

And in the center of that chamber, atop a mound of treasure and bone, lay the dragon. At first the knight saw only a massive shadow curled upon itself, a shape darker than the darkness around it. Then, as a cloud shifted and more moonlight poured in, the figure was revealed in stark relief. The dragon’s scales were the color of old ash, matte and lusterless. Its great wings were folded at its sides, tattered membranes stretched between skeletal spars. The creature’s body was gaunt; the outline of ribs pressed against its iron-grey hide with each shallow breath. A long neck coiled around the pile of gold, and atop it the dragon’s head rested, crowned with two horns that curved back like scythes. The dragon’s eyes were closed, or so it seemed, if it sensed the knight’s presence, it gave no immediate sign. It looked as if it had been waiting here for a very long time, a forlorn warden over a kingdom of emptiness.

The knight held his breath, silently stepping further into the hall. He felt an immense weight in the air, as though the very presence of the dragon displaced all hope and cheer, leaving only an all-pervading emptiness. Within that weight was a pulse, a slow, weary throb that resonated in the knight’s chest. He realized it was the rhythm of the dragon’s breathing. Each exhalation from the beast carried a faint glow deep in its throat, a flicker of inner fire that glowed dull and hollow. This was no proud, raging flame to illuminate the darkness; it was the guttering ember of something long past its peak, clinging to life. The hollowed flame. The phrase drifted through the knight’s mind as a dawning understanding bloomed within him.

Suddenly, one of the dragon’s eyes opened. It regarded the knight with a luminescent amber gaze, slitted pupil narrowing ever so slightly. The knight raised his sword reflexively, the steel trembling just a fraction in his grip. Yet the dragon did not lunge or roar. It only watched him in silence. In that creature’s eye the knight saw a depth of ancient weariness, an anguish that transcended the simple fury of a beast guarding its lair. The dragon’s stare was not the wild, predatory glare he had expected; it was something far more measured, almost plaintive in its silence. The two regarded each other across the expanse of the chamber, survivors in a land of death, each sizing the other’s intent. The knight’s heart pounded, but he kept his breathing steady, matching the dragon’s slow inhalations. For a brief moment, man and monster simply existed there, sharing the stillness.

It was then, in that eerie quiet, that the knight truly understood the fate of those who had come before. His eyes drifted from the dragon to the shriveled corpses sprawled amid the gold. He saw now that none of the remains bore wounds of battle. Swords lay sheathed or only half-drawn beside their owners. Shields were slung on backs or dropped without a single dent. These men had not died in combat at all. They had died in despair and confusion, their life simply ebbing out until only dry shells remained. The knight recalled the unnatural thirst and hunger that had plagued him on his ascent, how the water in his skin had vanished so swiftly. A shiver traced down his spine. This dragon’s power was no ordinary fire. It did not char flesh or rend armor; it drained the very essence of life, consuming without devouring. The treasure’s gleam and the promise of glory had lured countless souls, only for them to wither at the dragon’s feet, sustenance for an insatiable emptiness.

The truth lay bare before him. The desolation of the village, the barren lands, the dried-out remains clutching at gold, they were all consequences of a hunger that was both immense and hollow. This creature, ancient and cursed, carried a flame inside it that gave no warmth, only a ravenous cold that leeched life from all it touched. The dragon was not merely a beast to be slain for plunder or fame; it was the afflicted heart of the land’s misery, a being as much to be pitied as feared. The knight felt the weight of that revelation settle heavily upon him. He lowered his sword a fraction, the point hovering above the dust-covered floor. In the dragon’s weary gaze, he sensed no triumphant malice, only enduring pain, an agony perhaps echoed by the silent plea that had guided him through stone and hunger to this very moment.

A slow breath escaped the knight’s lips. The dragon watched, unflinching and deathly still, as if resigned to whatever fate the intruder might bring. Around them, the night air sifted through the broken roof, carrying the distant scent of dry fields and the memory of prayers whispered in desperation. The knight’s resolve hardened, tempered now by understanding. This was the truth he had been meant to find: that the scourge of this land was not a mindless terror, but a suffering presence that had endured alone in the dark, its flame burning itself hollow. The silence between man and dragon stretched, profound and expectant. In that silence, the knight could almost hear it once more, the voiceless entreaty that had led him here, the call for an end to the wasting curse that bound both dragon and domain.

He straightened his back and tightened his grip on the sword hilt. The emptiness in his stomach and throat no longer mattered; he was filled now with purpose. Whatever came next, battle or mercy, destruction or deliverance, would be guided by the knowledge gleaned in this moonlit hall of death and gold. The knight inclined his head ever so slightly, a gesture of grim acknowledgment toward the creature before him. In response, the dragon merely closed its tired eye again, as if in acquiescence or exhaustion, its massive frame shuddering with a breath that rattled like a final sigh.

Under the shattered vault of the castle roof, knight and dragon remained in an unmoving tableau, two silhouettes amid the scattered treasure and dust of ages. Above them, the moon drifted free of clouds, bathing the scene in cold radiance. The knight felt that light upon his face and thought of dawn, dawn, which had not yet come but someday would. For now, the night held them both in its deep embrace. In the stillness, he offered a silent vow to answer the plea that echoed in this cursed keep. And in that same stillness, the darkness stared back with hollow eyes, awaiting the judgment of the morning that was sure to come.

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